I thought that the "where is the love" video was really nice, creative and inspiring because it's talking about helping all the poor children. My favorite part was when the big graffiti came up saying, "we are not a minority" because it made me feel something in my stomach. I don't think I have any connections except the old man was holding the book shouting, because one day I saw a man shouting at the sky I didn't know what he was doing and I didn't bother asking. This is my reflection for the where is the love video.
Well done, Raphael.
ReplyDeleteThis is a huge improvement! I really liked your first two sentences. You really communicated your feelings to me. That's important. Your connection is very random and funny. Next time, try to write more like the first part of your reflection!
P & L,
Ms. Lee